First Creating Awakening

Here's something I wrote on the luas yesterday. I was feeling great while not blind to the sorry state of Dublin in late 2005. Let me know what you think and give some suggestions if you can. Rob

Realised my fate is in my hands,
Make myself now 'stead of waitin for foreign lands,
I'm in my dream now,
Overlooking life like a third person shoot'em up.
Haven't felt so good since i was 6 in a field full of buttercups

Of possessions i've had enough, all my stuff's become fluff
I'm light as a feather, thoughts a mess, now together
The best and worst bit's that I coluld've done this whenever
But hey, now's better than never

At last I'm really sayin' it, creatin' it,
No longer forsakin' it but takin' it and makin' it
I've reached salvation gonna bring about a new situation,
One worldwide nation,
Or no nations at all, instigate their fall, make the corrupt crawl.